Descriptive Writing - Planet Pandora

Planet pandora was mysteriously spooker then earth. Crystal blued people, 9 feet tall hiking around in the dark woods with weapons no one has ever seen before. Leaves deeply falling from skinny and lanky trees. The moon was a ball of cheese. Floating islands crashing together surrounded with creatures no one has ever heard of. Energetic and full of mystery. Long grass swaying side to side, more colorful than the big long shiny rainbow hanging from the sky. I was walking through the rough and dark blue river it was like walking through the dark cold woods. Feeling horrified that some mysterious creature would pounce on me while rushing past the cold river. I always dreamed of going back to that mystery dark and cold place. Feeling more excited than ever.

WALT - Use similies and metophors and Recraft our writing to add descriptive language