Monday 5 November 2018

Germs Germs Germs!


Walt: About germs how they spread and affect our day today life and linking paragraphs. 


4 comments:

  1. Hi Tamisha It is me Tangi
    I really liked your Germs writing i was wondering why was your writing was highlighted is it something good about the writing or is it just a mistake.

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  2. Hi Tamisha
    I really like your Germ writing.
    I was wondering why is there a blue line on your title?
    But your writing is amazing.

    Bye.

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  3. Hi Tamisha
    I really like your hook it's great
    Maybe next time you could just do Ctrl+shift+v it's way better and easier to do.
    I wonder how and who you did this with also who you worked with on your writing

    Kind regards Jahnera

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  4. Hi Tamisha
    I really like your germs writing i was Wonder why did you take a photo

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