Thursday 5 April 2018

Ants Ants Ants!!!


WALT : Write using effective paragraphs.

So what we did was to plan about what we were going to write.

We thought of putting 4 paragraphs in our writing.

Then we did the writing and checked if it was perfect.

Lastly we posted it on our blog.



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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous5 April 2018 at 10:58

    Hi Tamisha it is me Tangi i really wish if there was pictures can you please add some ant pictures please? and it looks very plain with out a pictures By Tangi

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  2. Anonymous5 April 2018 at 11:01

    hi tamisha my name is jamaine and you did not need to put in more fore your walt you just needed to delete it but it is alright you can leave it there if its all right but when i readed it you just needed to add a little bit more in paragraph 4 by Tamisha from Jamaine

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  3. Anonymous5 April 2018 at 11:05

    Hi tamisha its me jahnera i really like how you have done heaps of writing but maybe you could of copy+shift+v instead of the screenshot.And what ant are you talking about?

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